Help I need to check if the quenya I wrote is fine.

I'm working on a fanfic: what if Mairon never got corrupted by Morgoth, thus the ring he makes it's to protec them all instead.

One ring to protect them all, One ring to find them One ring to bring them all And in the light guide them.

Er corma ilyar varna Er corma tuvien te Er corma ilyar tucien Ar cala peanta te

Can you help check or correct me? please