Arwen's Lullaby Audition Song-- Please help <3 :D

Kiara Rae #5228

Kiara Rae Edit Delete0 Hi y'all, I'm auditioning for The Lord of The Rings musical and want to be sure I'm both pronouncing the Quenya correctly + would appreciate a full translation.

The song is titled "Arwen's Lullaby"

the first few lines are in Quenya, the rest is in English

this is my attempted text written-

undulave ilye tier lome acai ita mornie sindanoriello ifalmalinnar imbe met o ia le

This is how it's formatted on the sides (unfortunately it doesn't include the accents)

Un - du - la - ve il-ye Ti -er lom- e.

A - cai - i - ta_ mor - ni - e, sin-dan - or - i - ell - 0.__

I_fal ma - linn - ar im-be met_ O_ ia le.

I'd attach the actual music sides, but I don't believe I can attach images?

Thanks y'all, immensely grateful (and hoping to learn Quenya myself soon)

Best,

KR ()^>

PS

if able to write it in tengwar, I'd love to see it :)))

Celebrinor #5230

What is your English text you are translating?

This is what I get.

Drowned every (ones) paths night (acai) that which blackness (from a grey-race) the wave-(songs?) between from (ia) you.

It seems like you are using Sindarin linna- in falmalinnar though I don't think that was your intention.