According to WJ/301, the expression tôl acharn "vengeance comes" was later changed to tûl acharn by Tolkien
Noldorin
he
pronoun. she
he
pronoun. she
hen
pronoun. she
hen(e)
pronoun. she
hene
pronoun. she
henia-
verb. to understand
ho
pronoun. he
ho
pronoun. he
hon
pronoun. he
hon(o)
pronoun. he
hono
pronoun. he
blâb
verb. (he) flaps, beats
tôl
verb. (he) comes
lhâf
verb. (he) licks
lhôd
verb. (he) floats
orthor
verb. (he) masters, conquers
osgar
verb. (he) cuts, amputates
síla
verb. (he) shines white
sôg
verb. (he) drinks
tôg
verb. (he) leads, brings
lobor
noun. horse, [heavy riding] horse
A word for “horse” in The Etymologies of the 1930s, derived from the root ᴹ√LOP (EtyAC/LOP). It did not appear in The Etymologies as published in The Lost Road, but Carl Hostetter and Patrick Wynne reported it in their Addenda and Corrigenda to the Etymologies (VT45/28).
Conceptual Development: The similar word G. lobros “steed, horse” appeared in the Gnomish Lexicon of the 1910s (GL/54), clearly based on the early root ᴱ√LOPO that was the basis for “horse” words in the Qenya Lexicon (QL/56). In The Etymologies, Tolkien first gave the root as ᴹ√LOB and the Noldorin form as {lum >>} lhuv, perhaps from ✱lōbo, but these were deleted and replaced by ᴹ√LOP and lobor.
Neo-Sindarin: Since Tolkien sometimes described S. roch as a “swift horse”, I’d assume lobor was a heavy riding horse or war horse.
lhoda-
verb. to float
The Etymologies of the 1930s had a verb N. {lhuda- >>} lhoda- “to float” under the root ᴹ√LUT “float, swim”, along with a 3rd singular present form lhôd “he floats” (Ety/LUT; EtyAC/LUT). The 3rd singular form seems to imply either a variant basic verb lhod- “float” or a paradigm in which the 3rd singular form of (some) a-verbs lost their final a.
Neo-Sindarin: Since the unvoicing of l was not a feature of Sindarin, most Neo-Sindarin writers adapt this word as ᴺS. loda- “to float”, as suggested in HSD (HSD).
Conceptual Development: The earliest precursor of this verb was G. lud- “flow, stream, float” in the Gnomish Lexicon of the 1910s (GL/55), clearly based on the early root ᴱ√LUTU as suggested by Christopher Tolkien (QL/57; LT1A/Alqaluntë). Early Noldorin Word-lists of the 1920s instead had ᴱN. lhid- “float, sail” (PE13/148).
êg
noun. thorn
A noun in The Etymologies of the 1930s glossed “thorn” under the root ᴹ√EK (Ety/EK). In The Etymologies this root was glossed “spear”, but I think this gloss applied only to the extended form of the root √EKTE, because elsewhere √EK had other glosses like “sharp, (sharp) point, thorn” (WJ/365; VT48/25; PE22/127).
Conceptual Development: In the Gnomish Lexicon of the 1910s, G. eg merely meant “point” (GL/32) while G. aith was “thorn” (GL/18), both from the early root ᴱ√EKE or ᴱ√EHE having to do with points (GL/31; QL/35). In Gnomish Lexicon Slips this became G. aithr “thorn” which also had an archaic sense “†sword” (PE13/108), a word that also appeared as ᴱN. aithr “thorn, [archaic] †sword” in Early Noldorin Word-lists of the 1920s (PE13/136).
gwedh-
verb. to bind
A verb in The Etymologies of the 1930s glossed “bind” appearing in its Noldorin-style infinitive form gwedi, with an archaic past form gwend/gwenn and a later past gweðant, all under the root ᴹ√WED “bind” (Ety/WED). Given its root, the expected stem form would be ✱gwedh-, so the form gwedi is probably either archaic or malformed.
Neo-Sindarin: For purposes of Neo-Sindarin, I would assume its stem form was gwedh-, and I would modernize its past forms as described in the entry on the Sindarin past tense.
harn
adjective. wounded
rhas
noun. horn (especially on living animal, but also applied to mountains)
The form rhaes in the Etymologies is a misreading according to VT/46:10
tog-
verb. to bring
A verb in The Etymologies of the 1930s glossed “to bring” under the root ᴹ√TUK “draw, bring”, appearing in its (Noldorin-style) infinitive form tegi and its present tense form tôg (Ety/TUK). It was originally glossed as “to lead, bring”, but “lead” was crossed out (EtyAC/TUK).
anna-
verb. to give
anna-
verb. to give
car-
verb. to do, make
dag-
verb. to slay
dilia-
verb. to stop up
gala-
verb. to grow
glin-
verb. to sing
gwanna-
verb. to depart, die
harn
adjective. wounded
lhammas
noun. account of tongues
lobor
noun. horse
mad-
verb. to eat
mela-
verb. to love
min
fraction. one (first of a series)
min
cardinal. one
nîth
noun. youth
nîth
noun. youth
rhasg
noun. horn (especially on living animal, but also applied to mountains)
rhasg
noun. horn
rhom
noun. horn, trumpet
roch
noun. horse, swift horse for riding
taetha-
verb. to fasten, tie
tarag
noun. horn
tarag
noun. steep mountain peak
thia
verb. it appears
tild
noun. horn, point
till
noun. horn, point
till
noun. horn
tol-
verb. to come
tol-
verb. to come
êg
noun. thorn
The Etymologies seem to list this word as a noun, but it is clearly the third person singular of the verb