Durins Gate like Phrases

Hi everyone! I am new here. Thanks already for considering my request :)

I would like to adapt a phrase from Durins gate. Are these two Phrases correct? Insted of "Speak 'friend' and enter". Its ment to be an jigsaw as well.

speak copper-coloured (and) sweet crystal, and enter --> pedo ivor ross melui a minno

speak copper-coloured (and) sweet crystal, and enter my soul --> pedo ivor ross melui a minno fae nîn

Greetings

Greeting gwain Mirian!

So, there is no word "Ivor" you are looking for S. [Ilk.] ?bril n. “glass, crystal”. So this would be Pedo bril velui a rhoss a minno & Pedo bril velui a rhoss a minno e·fae nín.