Victor Carnavali #5185

Hello everyone,

I'm planning to engrave a Quenya phrase on my wedding ring and would love the community's help to verify and improve it.

The meaning I want to express in English is: "How rare and beautiful it is that we exist."

A translator provided this version: "Yé úsenya ar vanë ma ëastalva na"

I also came up with a revised, simpler proposal: "Yé erwa ar vanë ëalmë!"

My questions are:

  1. Is the original phrase grammatically sound in Neo-Quenya?
  2. Does my revised version work better, or does it lose something important?
  3. Is there a more accurate or elegant way to express this sentiment in Quenya?

Since this will be permanently engraved, I want to make sure it's as correct as possible. Any help is deeply appreciated!

Thank you!