I tried to right another song in sindarin, but I'm not sure if I made mistakes. Can someone help me point any mistakes?
lais i gelaidh dannar or 'lae e forn, en annûn síla na galad aglar. Tirin en em a linnon, A chaeth i peth úfar.
The leaves of the trees fall on the north grass, The sunset shines with a pure light. I see the image and i sing, Because words are not enough.