Sindarin song

Dared Ellodin #5266

I tried to right another song in sindarin, but I'm not sure if I made mistakes. Can someone help me point any mistakes?

lais i gelaidh dannar or 'lae e forn, en annûn síla na galad aglar. Tirin en em a linnon, A chaeth i peth úfar.

The leaves of the trees fall on the north grass, The sunset shines with a pure light. I see the image and i sing, Because words are not enough.

Celebrinor #5270

Laid i·ñgelaidh dannar bo e·‘lae forn, en·annûn híla vo galad aglareb. Cenin en·em a lhinnon, a chaeth i/añ gaeth i farn ú-bith.

I used mo by agent of, with, you need an adj. aglar is a noun.

Not sure about the last part, “Because enough [are] not words”.

Dared Ellodin #5271

Thank you very much! Is there any word that ends in eb I can use in the end to make it rhyme?

Celebrinor #5272
  • S. ereb “single, alone, lonely”
  • S. fíreb “mortal”
  • S. gorthob “horrible”
  • S. maecheneb “sharp-eye[d]”
Dared Ellodin #5273

Annin Allen!

Celebrinor #5274

Annon allen. 😉

Thoronhen Tinnúviel #5277

You could say: Because not enough are words alone.