Quenya 

ar ámen apsenë úcaremmar

and forgive us our trespasses

The seventh line of Átaremma, Tolkien’s Quenya translation of the Lord’s Prayer. The first word is ar “and”, followed by a combination of the imperative particle á and the (dative) second person plural pronoun men “[for] us”. Next follows apsene, the aorist form of the verb apsen- “forgive”. The final word úcaremmar “our trespasses” is the first person plural exclusive possessive form of úcarë, with the usual plural suffix -r indicating the possessed noun was also plural (“trespasses” as opposed to “trespass”).

Decomposition: Broken into its constituent elements, this phrase would be:

> ar á-me-n apsenë úcare-mma-r = “✱and (imperative)-us-for forgive trespass-our-(plural)”

Conceptual Development: Earlier versions of the prayer used a different verb avatyar- for “forgive”, in what was probably a suffixed imperative form avatyara (I-IIa) or ávatyara (IIb-IV). In version I-IV, this was followed by the ablative form mello “[from] us” of the pronoun me.

Earlier versions of the prayer used a variety of words for “trespass”: lucassë (I), lucië (IIa-IIb), luhta (III-IV deleted) and rohta (III-IV). Most instances used the same possessive suffix -mma “our” as the final verion of the prayer, but version III used an independent pronoun menya, in its plural form menye to agree with the plural noun “trespasses”.

|  I  |IIa|IIb|III|IV|V|VI| |ar| |avatyara|ávatyara|ámen| |mello|apsene| |lucassemmar|i luciemmar|menye {luhtar >>} rohtar|{luhtammar >>} rohtammar|úcaremmar|

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Elements

WordGloss
ar“and, and; [ᴱQ., ᴹQ.] but”
á“imperative particle”
me“us (exclusive)”
apsen-“to remit, release, forgive”
úcarë“*sin, debt, trespass”

Variations

  • ar avatyara mello lucassemmar ✧ VT43/08
  • ar avatyara mello i luciemmar ✧ VT43/09
  • ar {avatyara >>} ávatyara mello i luciemmar ✧ VT43/10
  • ar ávatyara mello menye {luhtar >>} rohtar ✧ VT43/11
  • ar ávatyara mello {luhtammar >>} rohtammar ✧ VT43/11
  • ar ámen apsene úcaremmar ✧ VT43/12; VT43/12
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